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I was very impressed with your simple, clear voice. You have done a nice job with this story. Just enough. The dialog was crisp. Especially loved your metaphors - meatball of fury - a thousand bunnies jumping you. Great unusual visuals. For your age, this is very good writing. Nice job! Robynn
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Cute story about real a life situation and I love the song. Serena
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