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And at that last comment I'd forgotten to vote! Now I did.

You're 13 and wrote this story????
Wow! Good job, Brooke! You have already come so close to mastering the short story. I loved how you wove the narrative in there where Tiffany relived moments long gone. Very effective and not easy to do.
I wish the contest would have allowed at least 10 more words, lol, so that you could have told us what a "perfectly normal body" actually meant!

Very nice, frightening little story, indeed!

I liked it. Nicely descriptive too.
Well done and good luck
Voted
Wendyxx

Very fast paced indeed. Great imagination and well presented. Voted

Thank you SO much everyone for your feedback and support. It means a ton to me :D

Good scary stuff. I voted for you.
Augustus.

The story moved very quickly, you made me feel like I was there . Good job and a vote Serena.

A good run from a monster. keeps reader going.

Thank you God, indeed!

Very fast paced- very good..thanks Happydagger for the link!..p