Wichtiger Beitrag
I feel empathy not sympathy.
Nice work on this poem.
~Jillian
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Structured well.
Black.
You wrote this as an observer of humanity I trust.
Whatever...you wrote it well.
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Brittany, I'm not sure if you just like to write about death or if you consider it. However, your poetic skill is remarkable. The way you used word groupings and pairings is pretty clever. I believe you've captured how many people have felt, at some point in their life. We all get depressed sometimes. Yet we can learn to enjoy living and embrace, even anticipate, a bright future ahead of us.
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All I can say is...LUV IT!!!!
Great job, JacktheUnicorn! lol! Keep it up!
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