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Interesting story. I liked the ending. The well, crap. actually wrapped it all up quite well. There are a few grammatical errors and what not, but editors would take care of that, so no worries there, lol... overall, you did an excellent job at telling the story and describing people and places. The execution itself could use improvement, but that will come with experience. You obviously have the potential to be an incredible writer, and to be honest, your style and genre are right up my alley. My book is also about immortals and Gods, so you definitely peaked my interest. Don't ever give up writing, you have a knack for it.
j.sin

why is this book named beauty of the night?