I LIKE it, Bridgy...so far! You can really, really write:)
One thing...maybe??? On page 3; the last two full paragraphs. Present tense, maybe?
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What a beautiful story - loved it!
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Thank you! Glad you liked it. I hope to re-write it some day.
Wow.. speechless
Love the entire story. So an amazing job on this book. The imagination you created to make this book happened. I do hope it get published one day. Its a story worth to read.. There what just some qs still that did not have answers. Like about the necklace that said Elizabeth name and what happened to his other daughters siblings. Just amazing either way.
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Funny you should ask about Edmond's daughter. I am writing a book called "The Huntsman's daughter" that explains what happened to her. I also plan on re-writing the book so I CAN publish it! Thank you so much for commenting!
Keep me updated !! I think your book is one of my favorites like FAVORITE. I also wished that Edmond and Rose would of have some more time together in younger version.
Haha! When I re-write it they will. I'm going into better detail with all of the characters. It makes me happy that you like it so much! I wrote it back in highschool of my senior year. I've now gone through my 2 years of college...so it has been a while.
And yes, I will keep you posted!
The most tears ive ever sheded for a book, I loved it and the funny thing was that while i was reading my mom started playing 'All of me John Legend' when Rose gave the diary to Edmond and it actually went with the book!!! This book is just Beautiful!!
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Ahaah! That's awesome About the whole song thing. Sorry you cried though. Very happy you enjoyed the book. Re-writing it so I can actually publish it! Thank you so much for commenting.
Hahah thanx
I couldn't stop crying at the end of the book. it was really a beautiful book and,
I can't thank you enough for sharing it with us.
With love \sakura
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Aw! Thank you soo much! ^^ and you're welcome.
That was simply...amazing! I loved this story will all of my heart. It was beautifully written and simply....wonderfully overwhelming! I loved the characters and all.
I was a bit sad until Rosa came back and everything became better!
At the end you had be crying happy tears!:) I love this..
You should try and get your amazing work published! PLEASE?
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Wow! Thank you ^^ I'm glad you like the story so much.
I Read the whole book from start to finish. I never stopped! It was amazing just everything about this book was awesome. The cover is beautiful, the blurb is amesome and the book amazing. I was so in complete and uter tears in the end, but I was also smiling. Im glad that everything turned out okay for each and everyone of them. (: Loved it! Thats all I have to say... Thank you for a simply AMAZING book!!!
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Whoa! Thanks a bunch ^^ And thank you for commenting.
Your book is amazing, it it beautiful and touching. At the end, which was perfectly laid out, i cried while also smiling at the sweet yet sad ending.
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Aww! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
very well written..would love to see this published...made me cry
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I don't know about well written, but thank you!
Thank you. Yes, present tense. In the story the house is somewhat of a character as well. You are reading what the house is seeing, how it feels and the sort.
Does that answer your question?