BookRix

Hey its me bri, idk if anyone is going to see this but i just remembered this book and i am commited to writing it i will be moving everything to a app called wattpad so if anyone realy wanted to read the rest go their my names armed_with_yaoi, i hope you all have a great day and come check it out!!

Very nice book but you should correct the spelling mistakes and continue it

you should post more but so far not bad at all

Hey, so I've seen you make posts here and there, asking others to read your book. So I did. Anyway, great beginning, awesome story line, you might want to work on your wording and spelling. For example: you wrote the word 'scince' and it's actually 'sense' or 'since'. Sense is referring to a logical thought or feeling and is also for your five natural senses. Like touch, sight, smell, taste, hearing, etc. Since means after, between then and now, ago, before now, or for the reason that. For example; Since you wrote the passage, I am explaining it. Or; I haven't eaten chocolate since last week. Anyway, you've got a great foundation here, and I hope to be able to read more of it.

Hey If you don't mind putting me in it that would be awesome I want to be the shy girl in the back of the class people rarely see and were black long sleeve tee-shirts and pants and a hoodie but i want blue highlights long brown hair and brown eyes if you don't mind. Thanks and please write me when you add more i love it sow far. Were wolf looks dark brown with blue highlights in its fur

P.s. Please start reading my book save me It would mean a lot if you commented on what you think of the idea or anything even suggestions but one things sure I am not adding any other super natural creatures
P.s.s if you want to be in my book please send me an emial with a picture of what you want to look like it can be anime or drawing or real you could have piercengs on your wolf or highlighted fur but no full on black wolfs please and thank you that is a special wolf only one. Please type up what you want to belike/personalitie. And tell me yourvbookrixs username so I can tell you you are excepted you all will be just sayin. Sorry already chose the beta Wolves sorry but you know. If your a guy or a girl with a girlfriend or a boyfriend and you want a mate it is allowed same process but you should problem tell her I will be writing about him/her not try a tell you how to live your life but you no. And if there's a way you don't want me to show you as tell me I will tell you about anything major happens to you. And I will need a description about you it can be vague I only need skin color / tan pale / eye color ( wich will be the same as your wolves ) and hair color . And if you want tell me what type of cloths you want to were Im descriptive. Now not try a be a pervert or whatever but if you want me to describe some of your rooms I will need ether your dream room or your room remember, you are at a very rich pack house so whatever but nothing crazy like a water park the rooms are about as gas the onesinthisbook ( not coping I found input in like fifteen other books. So yeah and anything else you want me to no there is defintly swearing in this book so there's that.
P.s.s.s my emial is briannaodell@student.swanvalley.k12.mi.us
Bye and I will update almost every night I also wanted to tell you I my character sky I no my names Bri but o well- will problem not be introduced to you until later in the book
Now byby I would prefer you send it to me by the end of the school year iam getting my iPad taking away wich includes emial don't worry I will still write
Omg now bye

Please post and comment even about the idea of the book or if you have any ideas please tell mel