The Girl In The Blue Dress

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Gelöschter User

Your going to write more right? It's real good so far. Please write more!

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seastarpwn

Dont take this the worng way, but i thought it was a girl intill the ending. Other than that. It was good :)

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ashokaatreya

Dear Brian,
Hope you would now like my short story worth readind and voting..in SUMMER CONTEST.
Ashok Aatrey

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ashokaatreya

The girl in the blue dress is a very simple prose and has the beauty of naive feelings for an unforgettable love.I was interestes in your social work experience,since I am too involved and committed to people and wanteed your share of ideas.My novel is also there in book-rix.Please tell me about your love of social work also.Happy simple reading.Thanks
Ashok Aatreya

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briandoswell

for reading The Girl in the Blue Dress and your Urban Story vote. I like friends like you.....

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paulashene

'Darling' but the tadpole attitude was there. I can see the subconscious longing for the unknown but wanting the comfort of the norm.

Very typical childhood ruminations which I think most adults don't remember. Children always balk against change, throw themselves into the present, forgetting it was the change they didn't want, but if they do realize it, it is shrugged off - great insight [or remembrance] into the mind of a... mehr anzeigen

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gooduklady

Your story was lovely, Brian. Definitely very British and should appeal to the younger set. My only complaint is....I wanted him to meet the girl and see what happened. But I guess that is another story. Yes, you may steal my cat...but remember, there are plenty of kitties on Google.com that you can download if you want. All the best.

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briandoswell

I don't know if paigecarter is one of your 'friends', but it was her Bookrix ID picture that prompted the story. I have a feeling that boys of that age never actually meet the girl, especially if there's a football match on. I'm off to read memoires,

B

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