I see a little sad story in progress. But her boyfriend truly is a sweet guy for still staying with her and giving her support :) I hope they'll still be together 'til the end.
As for the writing, you still have to worked on some spellings and tenses here.
But still I see a good story in progress. Leave me a note when you've added more :)
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