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IT TURNED OUT TO BE A GOOD ENDING.
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Good she's alive. I hope you continue with and continue keeping Macy alive :) Just one thing. I just got confused with what the nurse said in the end. You wrote something like 'her heart stopped beating'. I think it's supposed to be 'her heart is still beating'(?).
But anyway good continuation. Looking forward for the next.
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