Cute story...or rather cute character. Perhaps if I'm a witch I'd do what Selena does to people who cross her...lol..:)
And yeah, I would like to suggest checking the typos and tenses, and some sentences on the narration part could do some tweaking. But nonetheless, the opening pages were fun. I liked the diary idea, too and would love to see how you'd develop the story :)
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