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great story

For a fifteen year old, you seem to be wise beyond your years. Your story was an easy read, true to the emotions of the dating scene and insightful. Just enough revealed to let the reader be able to commiserate and relate. Good Job, keep writing! Robynn

It is tough when people look for perfection on the outside and neglect the great person within.

- thanks so much , ill try to work and improve .

I really liked your story, Brea. It was poignant and very revealing. I am sure many people feel exactly like you. One tip, though. Always capitalize "I". Not "i'll" but "I'll" - that is the only fault I could find. Keep writing. You have have a strong voice. Valerie