Hidden Life
My friend, kouen.ninja, and I, are working together on a new story, with the working title of "Hidden Life." It's set in the 31st century, and it's about about a couple of girls, twins in fact: an abused slave named Lily Whitlow, and a troublemaking orphan named Jasmine Firetongue. In "Hidden Life," they learn about their kinship, their real parents, and a scary secret about themselves: they aren't completely human.
Kouen.ninja and I would appreciate your positive criticism and advice. I will try to post a new chapter every week or so, and if you would like to be notified of when I post more, just comment and ask me to send you a message next time I add more.
Looking forward to your feedback =D
~Bravey and Ninja

Stichwörter: 
dragons, future, mythical
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bravefire43

actually, silver, scratch that, glade and i have been discussing it, i think lily's gonna be asian or something, perhaps japanese...MAYBE...hmmm... ='

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silvereclipse

This is pure awesomeness...with a side of sweet...

I do have a question though.

Is the little girl that is forced to be a slave, is she african-american or caucasion?

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bravefire43

thanks lol me and glade haven't worked on it in a LONG time, though...we're planning on doing it over the summer though...and yeah, you do =( we miss you

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flicka

Hay cool Bravey yall have over done your selfs :) its sweet. I really to get back on the fourms :(

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Renier Laroche

I love the way u to blend the two twins lives togather.And showed what their powers might be but not to munch keeping the reader still puzzled.You to have the makeings of a great fantasy book writeing team.

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