BookRix

Have to point some things in the first story. You need to fix struggle to struggled.

"At last there off" it should be they're off not there.

You did a good job with the twists.

Came back to vote...good stories.

you really weren't kidding with the title!

Okay. Thank you for your feedback.

Good stories all three.
Please work on your spelling...it would add so much more to them.

Thank you. Feed back is appreciated.

good twists.