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that's one hell of a confusing run-on sentence...
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hmmm I'm not sure if I like it all not, see my problem is I got the impression it was rape and not consented sex, just because he succumb to it at the end and he was rough back dosent mean it wasn't, also I'm a little confused by the ending my temporary husband knew what I did she ?? she ?? ermmmmmm. I kind of like the idea and maybe if you extended it and gave a little more description it would be easier to understand and enjoy.
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