BookRix

reading this before now. A great story with one of your little twist in it. Love it...Paula

As you so rightly say:'Never judge a book by its cover!'
What is more we are all created equal at least in that respect! (The wind)
Thanks for popping in to read and comment on my story.
All the best.

Betty

Dear David,
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my story. I'll have to reread it to find those errors; if I can't find them I hope you will point them out to me.

Celestial being? That was not what was in mind, but maybe she was?

What I was thinking of was that it would have made her realise that she should not be too quick to judge and condemn other people, after all basically we are all equal; we can all do something as undignified as letting off wind in public.

Thank you once again. Your comment means a lot to me. Have an enjoyable weekend.
Best wishes
Betty

This is a pretty darned good piece of writing. I noticed a couple of minor typos--nothing that a thorough proof reading wouldn't fix. The story was great. The male character's dialogue caused me give consideration to the possibility that the old woman might have been thinking out loud without being aware of it, or that this lowly appearing man was perhaps much more than imagined (i.e. a visitation from a celestial being).

"For whatever you have done unto the least of my servants, so have you done unto me." ~Christ

Very good work. Thanks for sharing it.

I liked this story, it had a neat ending. I have gone through what the riders have myself. Funny how the mind plays tricks on you.

I liked this story, it had a neat ending. I have gone through what the riders have myself. Funny how the mind plays tricks on you.

I really enjoyed this book. All too often we fall victim to our own prejudices and assumptions. A job well done!