BookRix

I've just read your very generous comment; thank you very much for giving me a star and voting for my book.

The lives of people, who never do anything sufficiently spectacular to hit the headlines, interest me much more than anything else. They trudge on year after year and do what they can to give their lives significance.

Sincere best wishes and thanks once again.

Betty

What great story-telling abilities Betty.
You've also chosen several modern-day (yet, timeless) dilemmas, and woven them into a tale of what love and life are really all about.
Characterizations are perfect. Dialog; perfect. Overall rating for this one: Perfect.
I don't think my vote is going to make much difference (got one anyway though)...you're right about the huge amount of net-working involved with these contests. Hopefully the next one will be a bit different.
I see that you do have quite a few fans though, and if more people were doing the reading for this particular contest...I think you'd be right up there close to the top.
Thank you for this well-delivered insight into some of the many truths of human nature.

My best to you,

Robin

i really love this book, when i started to read i could not stop untill i was done. very good book

Great story! Thanks for letting me read and comment. I vote your book. All the best!

Hello Amberis,
Thank you for reading my book and I'm glad you liked it well enough to give it a star.
All the best
Betty

I liked this story a lot. Your command over the language is excellent. You are very talented.
regards,
Koyel

Hi Betty!

Thank you for reading my book! I truly enjoyed this, it was funny! I loved the dialogue. Great job of building tension and developing interesting characters. Granny rocks! I enjoyed the ending, did not expect that at all.

Great Job, look forward to reading others :)

Dear Etelizabeth,
Yes, I see what you mean; changing viewpoints does interrupt the flow. As I've entered the story for the competition, I cannot enter it immediately. Afterwards I can and probably will.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
All the very best.
Betty

I read your book, and found it a very compelling story; the only thing that stopped my read was when the point of view changed unexpectedly and I had to regroup to see who was doing the speaking. The story itself is absolutely a gem, and would be unbeatable if the flow of characters was told by either a single person, or possibly only one other change. I loved the tale, and thanks for giving me such a glimpse! Wa do, Elizabeth

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Best wishes
Betty