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I enjoyed the story and hope more will come soon
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How can you not continue this battle of good versus evil? Your characters are portrayed as strong and yet compassionate and have a unified spirit between them. The story is compelling and besides, you are giving us a great look at the lives of fairies. Let the saga continue.
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It is! Rebels will be out soon :3
Comments like that really help and inspire an author to continue. I'm about to start the next installment! (squeak!!!)
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I this book was very well done. There was lots of description and action! I would stick with this book and polish it up a little. Listen to what others have to say about your writing. It's hard for us to see our own mistakes. Content is very important and you have a likable character, I think you could do a lot with this!
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I didn't base it on your book, I just thought it up.
I like changing POV, but I will do one view a chapter in 'Rebels', the next installment.
Keep checking the official blog to it for the latest news! (See my page in WebWriters)
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This sounds like the book I'm reading at school, by any chance did you get the name Wayfarer from there?
Just a small complaint: The constant changes to the POV are confusing me. I've never known a book to change the POV so much in one chapter! Try and keep to one person per chapter, that's what I do. It leaves more cliffhangers for the reader and keeps their mind free from confusion!
Otherwise, this seems interesting. Keep... mehr anzeigen
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