BookRix

Nice, Bethan, nice. Three different moments in someone's life; a life well-lived. i'm glad I had a chance to read them. I left with a sad smile on my face.

Bethan,

You have written three very thought provoking and touching short stories.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Good writing!

Life is so short. This is so full of emotion...happy and somewhat sad. One of the top ones in this contrast.

It's really all there is to life, no?

You've captured some nice moments and then... a judgement that we seldom get to make.

Very satisfying.

You're showing some mature writing far beyond your years here, and I really hope that you keep going. Very nice descriptions and a thoughtful progression of ideas. Great!