Yes – this is what I would call potential. Expression of pure emotions, in an acceptable authentic manner and wrapped in a real story even though the subject isn’t new. Thanks for this type of wording and for the mature style. It’s a relief compared to other stuff which can be found here!
Kind regards
Paul
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I found this such a great and riveting story about a love that transcends life and the ravages of a disease. I actually wanted to cry thru parts, but really at the very end. A truly lovely story Beth!
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is being featured in the new YoungWriters contest.
http://www.bookrix.com/_groupforum-en-win-a-writers-and-artists-yearbook-2003.html
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Wendy
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Sooooo good, but now I'm fighting tears!
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From the very moment I began reading your book I was captivated. The details and descriptions were to die for (no pun intended). I find it hard to see women explain in a males POV and you did it wonderfully. Great job and Keep up the good work!
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First off, this book is absolutely beautiful. I was near tears at the end. You made this story play out in such a perfect way that I wouldn't change a single thing about. Amazing job.
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This is SUCH a beautiful story, Beth. Vivid, poignant, real... I'm at a loss for words.
When I was in my teens, a friend's mom died of that same disease. It's terrible.
This is literally one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. Seriously.
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What is it about your stories exactly that makes reading them so effortless and pleasurable, Beth? It's what's in all our writers' hearts and aspirations, only you have it naturally, and we must strive and only hope.
Anna was truly poetic in its way. I was drawn to her immediately, and so glad to have met her again afterward.
You are truly an artist with words. On a scale of one to ten...One Hundred.
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I love it. You capture the essence of this terrible illness into a relationship with Anna and Ezra. The relationship lives deeply within your characters;traveling in and out of a dream, you do it well- a difficult task and told from a POV, just right, but clearly as difficult. Thanks for the wonderful read.
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