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Hey Ben,
Ready to try it again, huh? This was the first story I ever read of yours and I was very impressed then. Best of luck to you in this contest. Great story and well written. And of course you get a vote.
Denna

Hi Benjamin,

I like your opening line.I like this story. There are a few spelling and sentence errors but the plot was good.

Good luck

Bek :)

This is one of those stories that I got a great sense of satisfaction in writing. The character just seemed (worryingly) to flow naturally! Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it.

You are my competition - but I HAD to give you a vote for this. Loved the story and especially the ending. You write very well indeed. Look forward to reading more in the future. Valerie

Ages mate. Mainly shorts, but I'm also writing a novel when I get time! Cheers for reading!

Liked this one a lot too cuz. How long have you been writing?

This was Really GOOD keep it up!