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I liked this very much. A touch of humour and a easy read

Sorry that i've been away for so long everyone! I'm back with gusto.

Thanks for all you comments about my short stories. I do appreciate you taking the time to give your views.

As soon as you see the twist it is revealed to you. Brilliant!!

Good twist at the end!

Hi Ben,
The book was excellent and told with great anticipation for what was to be revealed to Frank…good job on your short story. I of course cast my vote and saved as my favorite…Good luck to you. Please read my book reflections and give me your opinion and a vote if you like. Reflections/Little girl’s short stories is a self-published book and needs some editing revisions but the concept is very good.

Thanks
Linda B lbolden.books

I did wonder if it was a bit too predictable, but only a few got it! Thanks once again.

Ben

Nice story. Predictable. I think you could have left out the hint that Frank has a granddaughter.
Got my vote. Good luck!

Great read, would love for you to expand the story. Best of luck.

i read this with ease and found myself liking it. the interaction between the two characters, divided by time and years, is good and tells about their respective generations. however, when frank tells about his granddaughter i guessed what was going to happen. that apart, i liked the simplicity of this and also the fact that it ends where it does, leaving things to imagination.
two or three typos here, a missing apostrophe and a misplaced one in couples right at the beginning of the story.

very good story