You and Me

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User: belledeks
You and Me
the way two orphaned sisters battle through life together to survive

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jeremyblank

If you are entering a writing competition at least have the sense to spill chock, it is sloppy and should have been proofed before uploading. Like too many other fashionably casual books, but being casual about the very tools you use is slack as!

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artmommy

but the grammar and spelling errors distracted me too much from finishing it.

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constantine.eternal

Good luck in the contest... With some grammatical editing and what not, this could turn out to be a pretty good story.
J.sin
Feel free to browse through my stories as well... have a good day

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