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Nice littlebook. Do not be offended but I have some concerns though:

Edward and Jacob speak in their minds so why would Edward have to ask Renesmee to tell Jacob to where they talking.

Jacob not to mention Edward would never allow Renesme to return Forks alone. And when they followed behind I do not see how Jacob being so protective would not have been involved in the conversation with Sam.

In Amber's recollection of what had happened to her, how would she have known all their names? And her recollection was too long.

There is no way Sam would allow her to take Amber home before handing him the money.

There's no father that would ground their daughter in a life and death situation.

How comes Edward is asking so many questions, he's clueless that's not like him since he reads minds and Alice usually sees and informs him of what's going on.

Why would Jasper admit to a crime he did not commit?

I wanted to read more about Jacob & Renesmee life together.

Good job anyways.

i loved but i didn't understand any of the Spanish except the ones i've seen before

so so so so awesome book loved it

it great

wow remind me not to re-read thiz...the first part was fine but then the mria part shouldn't have happened

In the begining, you have numbers after every paragraph or so. Is there a certain reason they are there? I'm not criticizing you, I'm just curious.

i luved it i think if a publishing author read this book shed be surprised and 1 more little thing u spelled house hose and good goob and there was very little amout of spacing senora cullen adios amigos

i luved it i think if a publishing author read this book shed be surprised and 1 more little thing u spelled house hose and good goob and there was very little amout of spacing senora cullen adios amigos

all the stuff in the 'hose'

this book was totally wicked not as good as real twilight but awesome nice thing with jacob & her cant have will have daughter