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Matured style of writing. Keep it up!

I love the parts when he's in the rain :) made the book good :)

I liked the read but I think it's more of a book for guys. I always try to imagine myself in books and I think I'm too girly. I know you are still working on this but let me know when you have more.

Review - Okay, you bring up a lot of questions in the fast pace. Definitely gave your lead a lot of character. Good descriptions on the fight scene.

Need some tightening in the sentence structure. But a good beginning. Good job. Robynn

This is really good. Keep up the great work. ^v^