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Cool book, cool start. But I have a few critiques.
#1: Spelling
· A lot of your grammar was spelled incorrectly.
#2:Capitalization
· You need to capitalize names of people, so when you speak of "Mommy" it needs to be capitalized.
Other than that, it was really good. Keep up the work!
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