I am new also and tend to check spelling and so on later, trying first to get a flow going. Like at the beginning when Lindsay describes the killing; move the words on to separate lines to give even sharp nastier intakes from the reader. Plan to give the reader a different feeling when getting information from the good and the bad cast.
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So hey! This is the first time I've reviewed anything here (I'm new too), so bear with me and I hope this is more helpful than subjective.
(Bad cop:)I really wasn't expecting much after reading your posts and bio thinking the spelling errors were an indicator of poor craft. (Good cop:)But I was surprised to see that your work had some good feel to it, and definitely has some bite and interest to keep reading. Assuming the... mehr anzeigen
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Thanks for the advice.
I always hate trying to critique stuff because it sounds like I believe myself to be an authority. And with my extensive background in publishing doodley-squat, an authority I am not. So, whoever gives you advice, take from it what works for you. (And I'm giving more advice... mehr anzeigen