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that's so sad :'(
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Aww this is so sad but a good in-site into feelings of a girl going through so much in her life, I can only hope it has a happy ending! Well done with your writing, you need to carry on! If I could give you any advice, it'd be to slow down a tiny bit, put in more detail and proofread your work, but other than that it's amazing and you should keep writing, can't wait to see what happens! :)
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