It is a sad story. As a story it is well written. If it is happened in a real life of a young girl,it is not good.
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I liked the story. It was confusing with the numbers but it was cleared up in the end. I felt bad for the girl that was described as homely. What does that even mean anyway? I think people should be allowed to decide for themselves who they want to be with. It's kind of sad that some women have to still go through that. Not trying to bash anybody's beliefs. Well overall it was relly good and easy to follow.I'm glad she... mehr anzeigen
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Thanks so much, I really appreciate your comments. Its true, countless girls are not given the choice to choose an education and career for themselves and forced into matrimony and child bearing at a tender age in many parts of the world.
Once again, many thanks :)