This is a great book! I winder what haplened to the dad.
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good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Good story. Still could use a bit more editing. You could make this into a full book if you want to.
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Thank you. This is just a short story. I'm already working on a new book. Thank you really for the positive feedback.