Definitely not what I thought it was gonna be. I thought it was gonna be about an Ice Cream Man not a murder. Loved it. You tell a great story. Let me know when you have added more as i want to know what happens next.....
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working on some new chapters and updates so stay tuned
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Whoa! Your opening sentence is dynamite! I'll continue reading after work today:
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lol@felix..thank you..please do and give me some feedback
Now that was different from anything I've read on BookRix.. I think different is good! You have some grammar errors but I'm sure you'll clean it up in time. Keep writing and Welcome to BookRix!
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thank you
appreciate it and I definitely will work more on the grammar aspect..
i know it's just an intro but i like feedback..please don't hesitate to make comments or suggestion or likes..
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I really like this story...The opening is what kept me reading this story. I hope you write more...I like to find stories that don't sound like all the other ones or as predictable. The only thing you should work on is maybe your grammar. Other then that, I would most certainly... mehr anzeigen
thank you very much
no [problem..i definitely will let you know when i update..thank you for the compliment and the feedback