Darkus Knight

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Darkus Knight
Darkus Knight is a new breed of the fanged clan. He believes he is above all that is around him even the lycanthropes fear him. Now he wants to be seated at the highest table but he needs the help of a hybrid, the only one of its' kind that isn't mutated. So are ready to deal with Darkus? Because he is always ready to take your last breath away


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judycolella

You have the start of a great, action-packed, engaging story. To make this something that has a chance for positive recognition in the publishing world (which I think it deserves), please allow me to make some suggestions, which perhaps you can use to do some further edits. I've done an edit of page one for you so you know what I mean - the revision doesn't change your voice or the content, but makes the narrative smoother... mehr anzeigen

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Ashon Thadon

thank you so much for your input..i will try to implement those ideals...and thank you for the feedback...i hope it will work out to be a great series

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