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Ashok, this poem is breathtaking. I like how you describe the meaning of love in a person's life. The references to flowers and honey sound biblical. Such eloquent and lovely words!
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beautifully expressed.
a truly lovely poem
perfect
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This is a nice poem. Although it is a little bit sad but quite touching. I like your two lines, “I lost my arms but . . . and I lost my legs but . . .” This is an expression of an unconditional kind of love.
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Hi,
Thank you Tina for reading the poem.
gud one
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Your story is very touching. It made me feel insignificant, for no problem is greater than yours. I commend you for writing it./joeparente I voted.
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Here is a refreshing look at what was thought as a bachelor's life with a bit of surprise. This is a 2 page quick read that is crying for comments and a possible vote. Thank you ./joeparente
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