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wow! you are very talented. i loved your poems especially 'the disguiise ' it is beatyfull :)
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I'm a poet but I enjoy reading other people's poetry. These poems were very good. Your rhyming was very good, it's a skill that you seem to have done well as some people you can tell when a line is added just to rhyme and it doesn't fit. There was no such problem with your pieces and every rhyme was justified.
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Neon Ashes
thank you very much. :) I plan on putting more up soon.
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Ohh my god ash;ley i really like your poems you are a real poet .Whats a i dea i really likeit brillant.
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Fariha
I was share your book in Facebook.
Fariha
I was also download it
Neon Ashes
wow thanks. ^_^
Fariha
your welcome its great
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thank you very much. :) I am currently working on another poetry book.
cool. let me know when you upload it
I will, it will probably be within the next few days.
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