I like it and I think you should write more. To make the book more readable you must edit it for grammar and style. Your spelling seems to be good and the innocent appeal of your fresh perspective comes through clearly. I enjoyed the read. Hope you write more.
i will try but its kinda hard to think of stuff to happen
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I like it and I think you should write more. To make the book more readable you must edit it for grammar and style. Your spelling seems to be good and the innocent appeal of your fresh perspective comes through clearly. I enjoyed the read. Hope you write more.
i will try but its kinda hard to think of stuff to happen