Still Night

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Still Night

This is my first short story! please read and tell me what you think!

   There is a constant hum, A never ending tone, an ever going heartbeat. Like lungs, there is a rise and a fall. Sometimes loud sirens swiftly race pass as the lungs fill with air, and as the lungs fall, the noise can die down to the hum of talking and taxi cabs. I think the most quiet I have ever experienced was on a subway. hardly anyone was on board and no one spoke a word to one another, but still there was the sound of the screeching breaks and the metallic whirring of the machinery, and that's just the way I like it.



 

 


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judycolella

I clicked on your link, then on the "Read Book" button, and winced. More and more these days I find myself reading stories here that are so poorly-written as to be all but incomprehensible. They're almost all about class-mate abuse, revenge, supernatural beings whining about what "female" gets the alpha. Same story over and over and over, different names, same stupid skinny jeans...

And then I read this. There are three, maybe... mehr anzeigen

Aryetta Rees

haha well I am very glad that I have not been a contributor to the eye bleeding so far! thank you for reading!!!

JP Harris

Read it...love it...well written ( some minor errors) but yes loved it..got potential...

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