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I saw a few errors/typos but it didn't distract the overall sweetness and cuteness of this story. I understand this feeling so I was in love with the book as soon as I read the first page! Keep up the good work!

This was such a sweet little story...I love cats! I have five of them and one is about to drop a litter pretty soon and I'm so excited to see what they'll look like because I get so enthralled over their furry splendor... :) Wishing you many blessings and keep studying..

Over all this was a very cute story to read, I'm an animal lover so I can relate to playing with a pet when I was supposed to be doing something else. And the cover is adorable, kittens are honestly the best pet ever :)
Some corrections: in the first paragraph did you mean that you were supposed to be studying, not currently studying?
page 5- "as evening wears on"..."I can't help but chuckle" and you can use kitten instead of baby cat if you're trying to show that its not grown yet.

Cute story! Kitties are so fuzzy and entertaining. :)

I've a kitty that is easily allured by my fingers when I move them.

Very nice short story. I detected 3 typos but they don't affect your overall work.

Congrats on your first story. Keep up the good work!

What a beautiful story of friendship!