Wow I like this! It's really hectic though, and I would recommend going back and fixing grammatical mistakes so that it is easier to read. I do like how dark it is though.
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On her 18th birthday, a lively family gathering turned chaotic as playful cake-smearing escalated into unexpected accidents and injuries. Amidst the chaos, the power went out, leading to a tragic incident that forever changed the way she celebrated birthdays.
Wow I like this! It's really hectic though, and I would recommend going back and fixing grammatical mistakes so that it is easier to read. I do like how dark it is though.