Wichtiger Beitrag
An interesting piece. I'd say this could be a full blown novel, though it works perfectly well by itself. It could even be the ending of a novella!
But you commanded the words on the pages very nicely. And though I don't really like that kind of love theme, it was good. A suspenseful and mysterious work.
Amazing job!
Keep writing!
---RbG
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