The blurp should be one family not on family
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Just curious, how did you change the color of the font on you book cover?
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This is one of THE BEST short stories I have ever read. I really think you should write a second book. This is wonderfully done. KEEP WRITING AND NEVER STOP!!!
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Very nicely done, Ark.
Warmest regards,
CJ
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Think brill is short for brilliant in that person case lol
I loved it, please keep them coming and don't stop ;D Good luck in the contest.
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Wow! What a great read!!!! This book totally deserves to win! You've got my vote, both here and in the wildcard nomination. Good luck!!!
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As been stated there are grammatical errors and editing you need to do but the story itself is good...enjoyed reading it...
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Thank you very much I called myself posting a revised copy but I kept getting an error message so I guess the original will have to do.
I did enjoy it. Also the way you interacted with so many characters in your story was very good. I find that not everyone can do that very well. Good job!!
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Thanks, I have many more good stories in me whenever I get around to finishing them.
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