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It is a beautiful cover. The English is spelled correctly. The arrangement of the words is not always correct so it is hard to understand but the overall story seems to come through. It's what I would term a 'bare bones' story. It needs fleshing out. I would encourage you to keep writing and with time you will improve.
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what a cute little sweet story...love it keep it up xoxo
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Very nice. Kind of reminds me of Cinderella.....
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