This is a nice piece. I enjoyed reading it in its own unique style.
The second paragraph, however was rough. It appeared that you accidentally switched tenses at times, so that tripped me up. Also, the last sentence is a bit cheesy and weird. I don't know, it might be just me..
But your writing reminded me of a poem. It was smooth and had a tone that reminded me somewhat of Shakespeare.
The story was saddening. I liked the way... mehr anzeigen
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everthing i was feeling at this very moment, i read in your book. it brought me to tears
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Just found BookRix. Love it.
The story is sad and touches the heart.
I thought of my father who dies in 1977 and the things I never told him. I loved him and never told him.
Thank you Anna Marie for writing this.
God bless you real good.
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Good writing, very sad how fear can take hold on some. Serena
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Powerful words with such deep meaning! I love its bittersweet passionate love that it describes!
Very sad yet good!
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