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"No more would he love me
and he killed the dove"
I can't decide if that is a phrase which means the end of innocence, a point of view on life, or a relationship.
But if i'm wondering--you did your poem right.
And the "captured by a demon" metaphor is really a unique way of wrapping the words...
"No more would he love me, and he killed the dove"
If the poem doesn't haunt--it's not poetry. nicely done.
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Great piece of work good luck in the comp
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