THE PROBLEM

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THE PROBLEM
Jordan is going to a basketball practice over the summer. But his dad wants him to go camp in lake gorge but Jordan does not want to go what will happen to him will he be sent to camp or will he go to basketball practice Jordan says he will not go to camp no matter what and he doesn't care what his father said. IS JORDAN GONNA GET HIS WAY READ ALL THE BOOKS TO FIND OUT THE MYSTERY.

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robbedbygreed

Ok, first thing I noticed (before I even started reading) was that you capitalized almost EVERY SINGLE LETTER in the whole entire story... This is not very attractive to readers and makes the reader feel as if you are YELLING AT THEM! haha ;) You're going to want to fix that.

Second, your spelling & punctuation is really off and there seems to be no spaces in-between any of the sentences! Ah! You really need to fix that as... mehr anzeigen

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ankonsaha276

um..... i don't know who the fuck did this story cause i did not..... i guess someone used my account??

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