I truly believe that you should keep writing, focusing on poetry. I saw something so very promising in these two very introspective works.
Read lots of good poetry. Lots. Explore the use of language and your unique perspective on life and the world as you see it. I liked these very much. Congratulations!
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to read in open empathic language that shows how we can handle our memories. like it much. ky
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I think that this woman who has suffered the death of her child some how found the courage and strength in the memories of her daughter to go on. Good job Serena
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