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Amend 'Summer' on your cover and try to insert a blurb.
When writing dialogue, use quotation marks...
"The storm!" he said to me (remove 'to me')
"The storm?" I said, (change to 'asked') "What storm....."
Good story though, and well written seeing as English isn't your first language.
Well done
Wendy
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