True Blue

when fiery passion fades and grows lukewarm and then cold Von:
True Blue
Sometimes love fades, it becomes lukewarm and we lie to ourselves, saying that we can still salvage the pieces that are left. And then we realize those pieces weren't worth salvaging, and that sometimes its just better to let go.

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JamesGough72

This has everything a reader would want. As they say "the looks of the writer determines the beauty of the book" Tell me when you write more.......

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Gelöschter User

this is very nice...:)

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Gelöschter User

Sometimes it´s hard to find out, that your lover didn´t tell the truth and often it´s too late to be able to change things. When it hurts to look back it´s time to start a new song of life:-)

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Gelöschter User

It was a nicely done poem showing how love can turn.

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felixthecat

:)
A nice play on the ages old, "Roses are red..." rhyme. I particularly like the sadness you so ably conveyed using the two colors.
Kudos, Angely.

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Adam Lewis LaValley

Outstanding poetry! I must admit - I used to hate the stuff back in the beginnings of high school. But as I see these pieces almost everyday on Bookrix, it makes me bring...a new view to it.

Awesome cover, by the way! 8D

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UniquePoet60

Angely,

Written with such emotion and passion.

I love your poem and look forward to reading more of your work.

Excellent writing!

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