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I read the story Mud and it made me thinks of times passed , I was raised in the hills of Kentucky by two hard working parents . there were nine of us kids and since my father was a farmer it was hard to buy clothes for all of us , being poor is not a shame or a dishonor , you have a smooth way about your writing and I enjoyed your story's
glad to have read some of your work, your a good writer , backwoods writer Stanley McQueen says so long for now ,

That layer that others see as weak and mild, is your foundation. It's what makes you so uniquely you.
It's also the very reason why you will always have love in your life. What you put out into the world, the universe, will always come back to you, two fold.
You couldn't turn your back on Adele, no matter how ignoring. You were doing what you were purposed to do and that's to show your loving heart.
I enjoyed this very much Angely.

Ah Angely, this little addition is kind of precious:) You tied the geological motif together so well, and the interaction with the old lady made me smile...at your natural patience. Didn't trust you after all that with $10.00? Laughing. Lord have mercy!

You are right in knowing that some day...!

Another small thought; a possibility. The old lady (the old man, the beggar on the street). Perhaps that person was an angel sent to help you rediscover and put to practice that virtue in your heart:)

Loved this chapter!

I enjoyed the poems and how you drew inspiration from family throughout the works. Please continue.

I simply love reading tales of yesteryear, Angely.

I could relate to your tale of 'Mud' and absolutely love your poems with their deep meaning & beautiful expressions. My favorites being, 'The River Between You and Me' and 'Eyes'.

Thank you, for sharing this wonderful book with us. It was great to learn more about you & your family.

Lol, I've got to tell you, when I read you're description of "Condom-onium," I thought you were going to talk about the weirdest places you've seen them... Lord, do I have some stories to tell about that.

Condo-monium :) Laughed my arse off:) Truly, God bless modern science, lol. Great writing as usual, Ang.:) : ):)

I love this one. You did a lovely job writing this memoir-esque collection of shorts, and now I'm excited to read more of your work!

This is a story to remember. The poetry and the short stories combined together made it even more memorable. It is indeed a bittersweet story to share. I like the "Mud" story also the poem you made for your brother, "Angels". It gives me a combination of sad and happy feelings. Yes, it is bittersweet. Great story!

A really fun and interesting read :) For some reason, I can't seem to write about myself. I don't know why. It just feels wrong somehow, like if I did, I'd leave something out, or put it wrong. I really loved this. It was honest and alive. Thank you for writing it. And I love the poem "The Stars On David." Truly great :)