BookRix

If this was the beginning of like a set of books, I can assure you I would be among the first in line for the next installation.

please wright more, need to find out what happened next

This is pretty creepy. A bit like Superman, crossed with Child's Play, crossed with Rugrats (you know the kid's cartoon?). An interesting angle- baby's world- yet there are quite a few grammatical errors here- I would suggest posting something more finely edited. I don't understand why you couldn't change the typo in the making of this book.
Nonetheless, some lovely descriptions, and a strange yet intruiging plot beginner!
;)

It was fun reading though with a melancholy dark side hidden within. I actually burst out laughing when you incorporated the typo in the story and went with the flow. Nice.