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Beautiful storyline. Wonderful intro...
You have many surprises that make you read.
All-in-all, I really like it.
The cover-words might need a different color to them, though.
Maybe a dark,dark greenish-blue...
But, do NOT change it because other people tell you to.
Good luck on your book, and keep writing! ^v^
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As short stories go this is a good begining. I'm very interested in the end. Some editing will be needed if it's to be sold on the open market, but not too much. I like it...
The cover is good, but I don't like the purple font.
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i really enjoyed this book. keeps u wondering
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AMAZING! Plz Write more soon! I really want to know what happens.
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thanks (sorry im late)
Please Write More!! This Is Amazing!! :D
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Write more, good start. This is the first book I actually liked.
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awwwwww thanks (sorry im late)
Thanks (sorry i'm late)
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