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I found that these letters were as realistic as possible, a tad funny, and very fun to read. It was well written and well executed. Well done! :)

However, you need to make sure you distinguish every letter from each other and say who each are from. Maybe put a "Dear...etc" so that your readers can tell which letter is from who, and not only that, but make sure each intro looks like the heading of a letter. Maybe make each letter into a chapter so it is easy to navigate through the book?

Otherwise, well done :) I enjoyed looking into the characters lives. It was an interesting peek into the world they live in.

Great job!
Keep writing!

---RbG